http://www.bobbarr2008.com/issues/
Off the bat, I'm not crazy about the tagline 'the answer is less
government' (though it is written in a sexy font). Somehow that
implies to my government-despising mind that the answer is
*government*, just less of it. Less of a bad-thing is *good*, yes, but
not the answer.
If I have HIV, I am happy to have a lower virus titer, but that ain't
the *answer*. The *answer* is a cure.
I'd prefer something along the lines of 'the answer is freedom' or
'the answer lies in you' or something to indicate that the answers
comes from *people*, not *government*.
But maybe - just maybe - I'm biased.
Some fairly shabby writing is in evidence, which tastes a little bit
like Shane Cory's style to me. For example: "Since 1997, Bob has been
a board member of the National Rifle Association, and quickly became
the vanguard of gun rights during his four terms in Congress."
'became the vanguard'???
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